Saturday, September 18, 2010

The Bat Who Couldn"t Fly

There once lived a bat named Tommy. Tommy was a bat who knew just about everything just that he couldn't fly because he was born with a small wing just like in finding Nemo where he was born with a small fin. Tommy was a bat who always dreamed of having the chance to fly once in his life before he died. Tommy would always throw himself off high cliffs to see if he could get the balance to ever fly but it wouldn't work he try about everything to fly but nothing ever worked. So one day it was a very windy day and he decided to take the last risk to fly. What happen at that moment was horrible as he threw him self in the air from a high tree. In that instance a plane was coming and he crashed into the plane and he died as he was falling down. R.I.P Tommy the Bat!

1 comment:

  1. Scary. Good references, some gramatical errors here and there but the entry's meaning was understood. Poor Tommy.

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